Life After Death Essays

How would you word this sentence?

I am writing a easy about Hamlets play, I am awful in english, and need to do good on this essay to make a B, one of the teacher requirement is to make sure there is no “awkward wording.” I have done my best to reword this sentence with no luck….what would you suggest to make this paragraph flow better.

Hamlet is saying that we are all cowards because if we knew what life after death was like, we wouldn’t be imprisoned in life’s daily problem because we wouldn’t be scared to commit suicide when life got us down.

Hamlet is saying we are all cowards; claiming If we knew of life after death, we would not be imprisoned by life’s daily problems, nor afraid to commit suicide when life became unbearable.